Into the Woods – ARC comment opportunity!

Hello, subscribers! I’m trying something a little different that I’d like you to help me with.

TL/DR: want to read and comment on a work in progress? Check out this link, or if you’re a Ream subscriber, head here and check your subscriber page. I’d love to know what you think of this story!

I’ve just finished up a story, “Into the Woods,” a 17,000 word novella that I’m planning to be the first a three part story arc. This story involves Phil, who’s on a solo camping trip while his fiancee, Petra, goes on a girls’ trip to a downstate casino. He encounters Jessie, who’s trying to learn camping skills to impress a guy she’s just started to date, and sparks (well, flames, actually, kind of hot and searing flames) start to fly.

This story has a little more character development than most of the things I’ve written lately, and a story arc that is going to involve Petra’s adventures and the fallout of both Phil’s and Petra’s experiences. Calling it “romance” is probably a stretch — going by the standard definitions, this story is very much about the characters’ erotic awakenings, and while I think in the end the characters are all going to find happiness, it’s definitely not traditional monogamous happiness. But it’s also not mindless (if entertaining and well-written) smut, like the gangbang stories I’ve been publishing recently.

Where you come in, is as an early reader: you can access the current story, warts and all (I know for sure I need to do a couple of line editing passes and probably sit with it for a while to make sure it’s doing everything I want it to do). Let me know what you think of it in comments on this post — good, bad, ugly, I’m all about hearing your thoughts. I figure if you’re subscribing to this site you’ve already demonstrated good (or poor, in a good way) judgment, and I’m really interested in your thoughts.

Feel free to share this link, too — pass it around among like minded friends, let them give their thoughts as well. The link will stay live until at least June 9, barring unforeseen circumstances.

I’m going to be off the grid over the weekend (not unlike Jessie and Phil), so I probably won’t check in on responses until Sunday evening. Any comments are greatly appreciated, and if this experiment works out, subscribers can be expected to have a chance to comment on upcoming stories on a regular basis.

2 responses to “Into the Woods – ARC comment opportunity!”

  1. Dr Girlfriend Avatar

    I read your story and loved it. A couple of typos early on but nothing else i picked up. The story seemed plausible which was a big plus for me. Nice ending too. Hope there is a follow up.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Cornelia Quick Avatar

      This was such a nice note to come back to after coming “out of the woods” — thanks so much! It definitely needs some more time in the editing process, and a little more time mulling over some of the scenes. It’s definitely more plausible, and with more developed characters, than most of my stories, which are usually pretty silly and just vehicles for delivering some dirty scenes. It’s also harder to write than those silly stories …

      I’m working on a followup about Petra’s weekend at the casino, and then trying to figure out how to tie it all up in a third story. It may be a little while before I’m ready for these to go out in the wider world.

      Liked by 1 person

Leave a comment

I’m Cornelia

I’m just a gal who knows what she likes, and that’s what I write about. I’ve got close to 50 erotic stories, ranging from super spicy shorts to novel-length explorations of romantic fantasies. Some are available only on Kindle Unlimited, and some are available on a wide range of ebook retail sites, including my own storefront that features exclusive stories and alternate covers available only from me.

Not sure where to start? I’ve get a Starter Pack of six story collections for just 99 cents each, or check out my handy guide based on length, series, location, and kink to find just the right Cornelia Quick story for you!